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B2 Report writing

Your task is to complete this writing exercise from page 105.

You should write 140 – 190 words.

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Hugo Ramos Gonzalez Feb 25, 2024

Recommended town improvements:

Introduction:
The purpose of this report is to list the actual problems within the area surrounding the school and to recommend ways of improving it, using the large quantity of money received.

Problems:
Next to the school there is a park and a dog park, there is are also some apartments. One of the biggest issues is that the park is a bit abandoned, so some of the benches are broken and there isn’t much aren’t many plants, but the most urgent of all is the teared torn up swing which can could injure kids playing in the park. Another important thing is the lack of a bus stop, because some of students use the bus to get home and the next bus stop is very far away.

Conclusion:
To sum up, the money available should be spent specially specifically on repairing the park equipment and making it a more eco friendly space but also to make a bus stop.  If there is money left over they could also build a bus stop.

Good job Hugo, you have covered a few good points there.

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